I Could Write It Down by Ben Thonett

A drive for diminished dominants.

Triads and harmonies,
enharmonicaly correct.
No rests or space.
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A measure of silence.
Rising ostinatos,
started by plagal cadence inversions.
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Layers and master tracks;
out of time,
missing downbeats,
samples and software.
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A largo tempo.
Compound swinging.
Pushes for harmonic minor breakdowns.
Major modes.
 fnord
This is the new phrase.
No bridge, just change.
Letters or notes;
give me a key?
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I can’t see Major,
Only Major blues
with minor thirds.
 fnord
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Going down dominant 7Ths.
With an accidental relative.
Passing notes.
That refuse to fit.
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No driving root.
Note one that works.
Note crescendo.
Forte forte.
 fnord
Stop this break.
Transpose, transpose
this frequency kills.
I want to diminish insanity.
 fnord
I can learn.
I can’t play.
Lucifer won’t let me enjoy.
 fnord
No more signatures.
Accidentals are too loud.
Flatten my soul
and dampen, dampen.
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Transcribe this mirror.
My mind rings re verb and delay.
Infinite Volta brackets,
repeat until unfinished.
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Ben Thonett is 21 years old and lives in Dublin.
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